I thought I’d share my new way of editing my cosy crime novel with you and I’d like to know what other people do and hear your tips too. In the past I’ve read and reread my work, often changing as I read on my laptop. Sometimes though I lose my place and find myself endlessly scrolling up and down looking for things I need to check which wastes time. Also this method does not fit that well into the short bursts I tend to have to work in during the working day (like half an hour before work or the odd half hour over lunch in a cafe). Also I forget exactly what I’m looking for sometimes and although I have several books on rewriting, find I need quick, pithy reminders especially if I’ve just come from a meeting and have lots of other stuff whirling around my head (as we all do during the working day). This year I’ve decided to edit in a different way as below.
- I print off 30 pages at a time and work through them making changes in pencil, keeping them in a folder
- If there’s things I need to check I just write these on a post-it note to do later when I’m at home and have more time
- I have two laminated checklists to refer to jog my memory. One I got from the website about Talk for Writing, a way of teaching writing to children by Pie Corbett. It’s called ‘The How-to-hook-your-reader toolkit ‘ and is short, succinct and helps me anyway ( I’m not too proud to use tips intended for 11 year olds). The other is ‘Strengthen your Fiction’ by Kerrie Flanagan which was a short item from the January 2018 edition of Writer’s News which I also like a lot as it distils editing down to 10 Top Tips ( I think this is available online, http://www.writers-online.co.uk)
- Then when I’m at home and less pushed for time I make the changes on the document on my laptop
- I also have a notebook in my folder and write out phrases I don’t like so that sometimes I can spend the odd half hour thinking of better words, similes or metaphors to include at a later date
- I’ve also drawn out a fictional map of the villages where this book is set as it helps me to know where the locations are in relation to each other and be able to decide for example if my protagonist Liddy could walk to the pub of if she’d need a lift or where she might walk her dog and stuff like that…This is also in my folder.
I think it’s helping. So far I’m 2/3 through but the last third is far trickier. I’ve got to tie in all those loose ends, check for continuity and so on. Also as I mentioned in an earlier post I’ve changed the point of view from first to third person so there’s lots of pronouns and suchlike to change too and I KEEP missing them! It’s very frustrating but I am getting there.
Anyway I’d love to know what you guys do and share tips with other would be writers. I’m sure some of you have this editing lark down to the fine art which I suppose it is.